Nancy Edmonds Hanson, APR

Office: 293.1489
nancyh@mnstate.edu

Mass Comm 210: Media Writing

Syllabus  Spring 2012

10:30 – 11:45 a.m.
12 – 1:16 p.m.
Tuesdays & Thursdays
Frick 258

Course information
Required texts, attendance policy
& grading overview
About the instructor  

Bad writing makes bright people look dumb.”
                                                      
 William Zinsser
 

All contents of this syllabus are subject to frequent revision based on class progress and external events. Changes will be announced in class. You are responsible for assignments due on the dates given in class; announcements always supercede the written syllabus. If an assignment published here has not been specifically discussed in class, check with the instructor before proceeding.
 

  Messages, media & audiences The writer Assignments
Week 1
1/10–12

 
Subtract yourself!

Media writing -- what sets it apart from academic writing

  • Fractured! Or, whatever happened to the mass audience?
  • Media crisis: Dangerous times/ times of opportunity
  • Changes in the audiences and society
  • Why your English teacher has not prepared you for media work
Writing for today's audiences

Why your business teacher might flunk this class

Introduction to Newsroom 101. You'll turn in the final "grade" screen for each of the exercises you complete. All of Set 1 (exercises 1-10) will be due on Thursday, 1/19.

  • Turn in prints of the final screen with your e-mail name and scores only. Do not print out the entire quizzes!
  • You must score 80% or higher on each newsroom exercise to receive credit.
  • After the next two weeks, most weekly assignments will include both regular Newsroom exercises and AP exercises, linked further down on the page.
  • These online exercises are independent learning. As a rule, we won't talk about them in class. If you have questions or issues, however, please do bring them up for discussion.
  • You will receive 5 points per week for completing the Newsroom 101 exercises. Over the course of 16 weeks, this multiplies to have a significant impact on your grade.

Check out: Media is a plural word and needs plural verbs.

Write: Brief essay on writing issues that bug you. (In class) E-mail it to nancyh@mnstate.edu. Put "MC210 -- writing peeves" in the subject line.

 

Format for all stories and essays assigned in Media Writing: DOUBLE-space your text. INDENT paragraphs — do NOT single-space, adding an extra line between paragraphs.

Write: Personal media audit. Assess  your personal media habits for 24 hours. Then compare them with someone at least one generation older. 300-800 words. Due Tuesday, 1/17

Read: Yopp 1 before class 1/12.

Check this out (sign up?): www.DailyWritingTips.com

Check this out: Minnpost, nonprofit online newspaper staffed by veteran journalists. It's free -- go ahead and sign up.

Check out: Pew Research--study of audiences, news and media This is the link for the media news data discussed in class.


 

Week 2
1/17–19

 
Due Tuesday: Personal media audit
Due Thursday: Newsroom 101 set 1  (exercises 1-10) .
Due Thursday: Class interviews with 7-step process
         

In class Tuesday: Student interviews for the 7-step process
 

 


 
7 Stages of the Writing Process

Interviews in class for story about your assigned partner. Consciously use Yopp's 7-step process. One double-spaced page. Due Thursday, 1/19.

Apostrophes: the rules on possessives, contractions and misuses
      Apostrophe worksheet

Commas: Punctuating compound sentences
        Comma worksheet

 

Read for next week:  Yopp 3 and the section of Yopp 5 on news values

Newsroom 101:  Set 1 due 1/17. Set 2 due 1/24.

Review  AP Stylebook table of contents

 

 
Week 3
1/24–26

 

Due Tuesday: Newsroom 101, set 2

In class: Newsroom AP exercises A

What is the Associated Press?

What's news? (Read Yopp 5 on news values)

  • "What's in it for me?"
  • News values
  • How local media cover the news

 

About AP style (review stylebook table of contents)

  • Worksheet: AP overview
  • Editing: Copy editing vs. content
  • Language mechanics: Run-on sentences
Reference:  Yopp 3 and 5 (section on news values)

Newsroom 101:  AP-A set due 1/31.

Assignment for Tuesday, 1/31: Find and summarize one local news story illustrating each of Yopp's news values plus the idea of currency. (Note headline or summarize; do NOT clip/copy and turn in entire stories.)

Check out: Copy-editing symbols   

Check out: InForum.com  

 

 

Week 4
1/31–2/02

 
 
Due Tuesday: Newsroom AP-A, full set.

Due Tuesday: local news stories demonstrating Yopp's eight news values (chapter 5) plus currency.

Due Thursday: Reflection on first news story you remember.
        

News elements and hard-news structure  (Yopp 5)

  • Baiting the hook
  • Hard news: Baiting the hook to catch readers
  • News elements: W's and an H
  • Hard-news lead and variations
  • Where news comes from
    • General assignment
    • Beat reporters
    • The role of public relations (PR subsidy)
    • Enterprise stories (ideas developed by reporters)
  • Exercise in class: Writing leads
  • Read: Yopp 3

    Write to discuss: Summarize the first news story you remember. Why did it catch your attention? Due Thursday,

    Links to worksheets:

     

     

    Week 5
    2/07–09

     
    Due Tuesday: Newsroom 21-25

    Due Thursday: News elements in 3 hard-news stories

    Text: Beyond the Lead (Yopp 6)

    Inverted pyramid structure

    AP Essentials

    Better Writing — suggestions and writing project

    • Redundancy and wordiness
    • Squeeze the air out
    • Pare down wordy sentences -- 12-word target
    • Introductory clauses -- TMI. (Start with subject)
    • Subtract yourself

    Assignment for Thursday: Locate three typical four- to six-paragraph hard-news stories in The Forum or on www.inforum.com. Cut or print them out. Mark up the essential news elements in each paragraph, including the two "who's" -- the label identifier in the lead and the full idents, usually in the second paragraph. Due Thursday

    Write: Four- to six- paragraph news story about the I-94 turkey tragedy. Use hard-news recipe. Be sure to focus on most recent element of story as of press time. Raw information for story.  

    Read for next week: Yopp 8 and 10

     

    Week 6
    2/14–16

     
    Due Tuesday: Newsroom 26-30; AP B-C
         Also due: Hard-news story on turkey tragedy

    Interviewing, Quotes and Attribution (Yopp 10)

    • Conducting interviews
    • Ethics and techniques -- what can and can't be quoted
    • Establishing rapport
    • Closed vs. open questions
    • The funnel

     

    Word Choice, Redundancy & Writing Tighter

     

     
    Read for next week: Yopp 9

    Write: Personality profile (feature) on media writer of your choice. Length -- 3-4 double-spaced pages (800-1200 words). Emphasis is on use of quotes and scene-setting.

    • Pick your interview subject and contact him or her this week! 
    • Report on interview is due Tuesday, .
    • Finished personality profile is due Thursday, 3/08.
    Week 7
    2/21–23

     
    Due Tuesday: Newsroom 31-35; AP D
          Report on interview with media writer (email)
    Text: Yopp 9

    Research & Observation

    Handling Quotes and Attribution

     

    Read for next week: Yopp 8 and Yopp 7 (5th ed.)

     

    Assignment: Brief report on your interview and how you plan to organize your personality profile — rough outline. Due Tuesday,.

     

    Week 8
    2/28–3/01
     
     
    Due Thursday: Newsroom 36-40; AP E-F
       

    Beyond Breaking News — Features & News Features (Yopp 8)

    • Wide world of features
    • Subject vs. topic (narrowing your focus)
    • The visual element
    • Leads -- descriptive and anecdotal
    • Corroboration
    • Attribution
    • Sourcing your story

      AP Essentials

    Assignment: Feature or news feature on topic of your choice related to a personal interest of yours. Three double-spaced pages. Due  Tuesday,

     

    Check out: Essential Google tips Google advanced operators (printable) Google cheat sheet 20 Great Google Search Tricks  

     

     

    Week 9
    3/06–08
     
    Due Tuesday: Newsroom 41-45; AP G
    Due Thursday
    : Personality profile
    THURSDAY:
    Midterm exam

    Producing Online Content (Yopp 7 in 5th edition)

    • Differences in writing for online sites
    • Inverted pyramids
    • Enriching content
    • Google basics plus advanced techniques
       

    Midterm exam on Thursday

     

    Midterm review

    Midterm exam covers Yopp chapters 1-10, especially topics discussed in class. All questions are multiple choice or T/F.

    A large section of the test covers AP style, emphasizing the areas covered in class and in the worksheets that have been distributed.

     
    Read: Yopp 7 (fifth edition)

     

    Spring Break
    03/12–16
         
    Week 10
    3/20–22

     
     
    Due Tuesday:  Newsroom 46-50; AP H-I


    Due Thursday: 
    Brief report on your choice of topic and angle for the feature assignment and sources (three minimum, including two interviews) you intend to use. Details of assignment.

    Recognizing bias and stereotypes (Yopp 11)

    • Identifying personal biases and blind spots
    • Guidelines for fair writing
    • Guidance & standardization from AP style

     

     

    AP Guidelines on race, ethnicity, religion, age, gender & disabilities Read: Yopp 11

    Assignment: Brief report on your choice of topic for the feature assignment. List and describe the sources you plan to use. You should investigate these sources and line up your interviews BEFORE writing this summary for next week. Due 3/22.

    Feature assignment details

    Links about usage for race, physical ability and other issues:
    Writing about people with disabilities

    National Association of Black Journalists stylebook

    Writing about American Indians (Society for Professional Journalists)

    Words to Age By: Glossary & Tips
    Journalists Exchange on Aging


    Society of Religion Writers stylebook (AP augmented)

    University of Washington/Yale bias tests



     

    Week 11
    3/27–29
     
    Due Tuesday: Newsroom 51-55; AP J-K-L

    Due Thursday: Web research on libel cases (see details at right)

    Libel and slander (Yopp 11)

    • Right to privacy
    • Journalism vs. commercial speech
    • "Public figure" vs. private citizen
    Intellectual property, copyright, trademark & patent      
    • Print vs. broadcast style
    Read: Yopp 13     

    Research & Write: Research and report on two current or recent libel suits (Web research). One to two grafs on each is adequate. THEN, in bullet points, briefly list three examples of illegal usage of copyrighted material in everyday life ... and three more practices that reflect respect for copyright holders' rights.

    Research & Write: Find two current or recent copyright cases involving the media;  summarize briefly. Due Tuesday,

    Week 12
    04/03–05

     

    Due Tuesday: Newsroom 56-60; AP M
        Feature story due

    Due Tuesday: Web research on 2 copyright cases


     

      Watch & report: Newscast log. Watch a half-hour LOCAL newscast with a timer in hand. List each of the stories, in order presented, and note the approximate time given to each. Weather counts as a single entry in your log. Note specific sports stories; reading scores counts as a single entry, too. Due Tuesday, 

     Read for next week: Yopp 13

    Week 13
    4/10–12
     

    Due Tuesday: Newsroom 61-65; AP N
       Also due Tuesday: Log of one local newscast

    Due Thursday: Feature story
     

    Writing for Broadcast (Yopp 13)

    • Different strengths and different styles
    • Passive vs. active audiences
    • Broadcast story structure
    • Writing for radio
    • Broadcast stories and packages

     

     

     
     
    • Bdcst leads and story structure -- hourglass format, the wrap-up
    • Broadcast peculiarities -- numbers, quotes
     
     Read for next week: Yopp 14


     

    Week 14
    4/17–19

    No class
    Tuesday
    (student academic conference)


     

    Due Tuesday: Newsroom 66-70; AP O-P

    Due Thursday: Personal ad recall essay

    Strategic communications:
    Public relations in the marketing mix

     

      

    Write: Describe the three earliest ads that you remember. (Please do not look them up online prior to writing about them. Your memory is the key here). Why do you think each has stuck in your mind? If you received the product, did it live up to your expectations at that time? Then describe three current ads that you easily recall. Again, why did these ads catch your attention? If you've bought the product, does it live up to its advertising? Compose your paper as a personal essay. Due Thursday

    Read: "Cutting through the advertising clutter" on www.cbsnews.com
    " How to cut through the advertising clutter " on www.USAtoday.com
    Is Advertising Dead? on Gallup.com

    Week 15
    4/24–26

     
     
    Due Tuesday: Newsroom 71-75; AP Q-R-S

    Due Tuesday: VALS/psychographics essay
     

    Due Tuesday: Ad recall assignment
    Due Thursday:   Personal advertising essay
      
    Strategic Communications
    Advertising

    Key concepts in advertising:

    • Reach & frequency
    • Features & benefits
    • Unique selling proposition
    • Niche
    • Branding
       
    • Herschell Gordon Lewis's great motivators

     

    VALS
           Demographics & psychographics 

    Write:  After taking the VALS survey (using link above, write several paragraphs on how well (or not) it pinpoints your motivations, preferences and interests. Do you think your group placement is intrinsic (part of who you are) or situational, or both? Then — using your experience with the questions and the SBI key to characteristics of different groups  — compare your profile with the answers and results you presume your parents or another older friend would achieve. 

      Group project:  Gladekua Yogurt
    Week 16
    5/01
     
    Due Tuesday: Newsroom AP T through Z

    In class: Prep for final exam

       
    Final exam
    5/04
    10:30 class: Friday, May 4, noon
    Noon class: Friday, May 4, 3 p.m.